two brothers / their names are Ray and Paul. / I live {at 328 

Sandy Dr.} / First I think [I will start {with my dad.}] / My dad works

{at Optimal Arts.} / He travels pretty much. / He goes all {over the 

place} asking (Gerundive to "he") {for money} {for his 

company.} / My dad's name is Bill. / I will talk {about my mom.} / 

Well she is pretty tall / and she is also pretty. / Everyday she stays 

home and watches my brother {except [when he goes {to 

preschool.}])  / My mom's name is Sarah. / I will talk {about my big 

brother.} / He likes to play (Inf., D.O. of "likes") golf (D.O.

of "to play") a lot. / His best is an eighty-two {on eighteen 

holes}{from the men's tee's.} / And that is good {from the men's tee's.}

/ My brother is 13 / His name is Ray.  / Now my little brother Paul. 

/ He can be a really pain sometimes. / Like [when I am talking {on 

the phone}and sitting {on the sofa}] he starts jumping 

(Gerund, D.O. of "starts") {on the sofa} / and I start 

bouncing (Gerund, D.O. of "start")  up and down. / But I 

like him a lot. / He is three years old. / His name is Paul. /

     I will talk {about myself.} /  Well I like playing (Gerund, 

D.O. of "like") golf (D.O. of "playing") also. / My best score 

{on eighteen holes} is an eighty-six {from the ladie's tee's.} / That is 

really good {for me.} / My best {from the men's tee's}{on nine holes} is 

a forty-six {on the hardest nine.} / I am nine years old. /

     I will talk {about Dierdorf Pupper Walter.} / Well he is a four 

legged creature / He is a dog. / He has brown and black fur. / I like 

him a lot. / He is eleven years old. / Yesterday was his birthday. /

     My house is mosty made {of bricks} / and the other part

is made {out of something else} / I don't know [what it is] though. /

I live {at 423 Sandy Drive.} / My house is pretty big. / We have a 

big back yard. / I have the biggest bedroom {in the house} {out of five 

rooms.} / Our basement is big. / We have a pinball machine and a 

big ping-pong table. / Most {of the time} I stay downstairs. / 

[Because it is cool {down there.}] / [After I come in [when it is hot 

outside]] I go down {in the basement.} / Then I get cold [so I go 

upstairs.] / My brother's room is the second biggest {in the house.} / 

My parent's room is {down the hall} [when you walk in.] / My little 

brothers room is {in the hall} also. / So is the bathroom. / We

have a living room and a family room and a kitchen. / Well that is

all {about my house.} /