two brothers / their names are Ray and Paul. / I live {at 328 

Sandy Dr.} / First I think [DO of "think" I will start {with my 

dad.}] / My dad works {at Optimal Arts.} / He travels

pretty much. / He goes all {over the place} asking {for money} {for 

his company.} / My dad's name is Bill. / I will talk {about

my mom.} / Well she is pretty tall / and she is also pretty. / 

Everyday she stays home and watches my brother {except 

[OP of "except" when he goes {to preschool.}}] / My mom's 

name is Sarah. / I will talk {about my big brother.} / He likes 

to play golf a lot. / His best is an eighty-two {on eighteen holes}

{from the men's tee's.} / And that is good {from the men's tee's.} /

My brother is 13 / His name is Ray.  / Now my little brother 

^{Note #1} Paul. / He can be a really pain sometimes. / Like ^{Note #2} 

[Adv to "starts" and "start" when I am talking {on the phone}and 

sitting {on the sofa}] he starts jumping {on the sofa} / and I 

start bouncing up and down. / But ^Note I like him a lot. / He

is three years old. / His name is Paul. /

     I will talk {about myself.} /  Well I like playing golf also. /

My best score {on eighteen holes} is an eighty-six {from the ladie's 

tee's.} / That is really good {for me.} / My best {from the men's 

tee's}{on nine holes} is a forty-six {on the hardest nine.} / I am nine

years old. /

     I will talk {about Dierdorf Pupper Walter.} / Well he is a 

four legged creature / He is a dog. / He has brown and black

fur. / I like him) a lot. / He is eleven years old. / Yesterday 

was his birthday. /

     My house is mosty made {of bricks} / and the other part

is made {out of something else} / I don't know [DO of "do know"

what (PN) it is] though. ^{Note #3} / I live {at 423 Sandy Drive.} /

My house is pretty big. / We have a big back yard. / I have the

biggest bedroom {in the house} {out of five rooms.} / Our basement

is big. / We have a pinball machine and a big ping-pong table. /

Most {of the time} I stay downstairs. / [(Fragment) Adv to "go" 

Because it is cool {down there.}] / [Adv to "go" After I come in 

[Adv to "come in" when it is hot outside]] I go down {in the 

basement.} / Then I get cold [Adv to "get" so ^Note  I go upstairs.]

/ My brother's room is the second biggest {in the house.} / My 

parent's room is {down the hall} [Adv to "is" when you walk in.]

/ My little brothers room is {in the hall} also. / So is the bathroom.

/ We have a living room and a family room and a kitchen. / 

Well that is all {about my house.} /