and my two brothers their names are Ray and Paul.  I live {at

328 Sandy Dr.} First I think I will start {with my dad.} My 

dad works {at Optimal Arts.} He travels pretty much. He 

goes all {over the place} asking {for money} {for his 

company.} My dad's name is Bill. I will talk {about my 

mom.} Well she is pretty tall and she is also pretty. 

Everyday she stays home and watches my brother {except 

when he goes {to preschool.}} ^{Note #1} My mom's name is 

Sarah. I will talk {about my big brother.} He likes to play golf

a lot. His best is an eighty-two {on eighteen holes} {from

the men's tee's.} And  that is good {from the men's tee's.} 

My brother is 13 His name is Ray. Now my little brother 

Paul. He can be a really ^{Note #2} pain sometimes. Like when I 

am talking {on the phone} and sitting {on the sofa} he starts 

jumping {on the sofa} and I start bouncing up and down. 

But I like him a lot. He is three years old. His name is Paul.

     I will talk {about myself.}  Well I like playing golf also. 

My best score {on eighteen holes} is an eighty-six {from

the ladie's tee's.} That is really good {for me.} My best 

{from the men's tee's} {on nine holes} is a forty-six {on the

hardest nine.} I am nine years old. 

     I will talk {about Dierdorf Pupper Walter.} Well he is a 

four legged creature He is a dog. He has brown and black 

fur. I like him a lot.  He is eleven years old. Yesterday was 

his birthday. 

     My house is mosty made {of bricks} and the other part 

is made {out of something else} I don't know what it is 

though. I live {at 423 Sandy Drive.} My house is pretty big. 

We have a big back yard. I have the biggest bedroom {in 

the house} {out of five rooms.} Our basement is big. We 

have a pinball machine and a big ping-pong table. Most {of 

the time} I stay downstairs. Because it is cool {down 

there.} After I come in when it is hot outside I go down {in 

the basement.} Then I get cold so I go upstairs. My 

brother's room is the second biggest {in the house.} My 

parent's room is {down the hall} when you walk in. My 

little brothers room is {in the hall} also. So is the bathroom.

We have a living room and a family room and a kitchen. 

Well that is all {about my house.}