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\-\{In
my essay} I'm
going to give name {to
the these people,}\,\the
two women's names will be Chris and Kathy, \-\and
the supervisor will be Bob. \-\{In
this story} Chris
and Kathy were short skirts {to
work }\-\and
Bob just could not keep his eyes {off
them.} \-\So
Bob said [that
there skirts were distracting {to
them.}]\-\Chris
and Kathy got upset [because
they saw nothing wrong {with
there skirts}]
and desided to sue.
\-\Now {in there jobs} {as the city planners} I see no problem {with women dressing} nicely \-\but maybe there skirts were just too short, \-\and the supervisor just like [what he sow] and counld not stop looking. \-\It is not the Chris's and Kathy's falt [that Bob can not control him self.] \-\But this is not sexual harassment, but maybe a comument {for the girls.} \-\And [if the girl don't like the comument] they should not dress this way. \-\But they should be allow to dress nice and not get harassment {from a man} [who can not controle himself.] \-\What should be done \-\may tell the men to look and keep his mouth close \-\and maybe tell the women not to were short short skirts. \-\Don't know \,\you {in a no win sixuation.} |
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Note: I'm guessing that the beginning of the last paragraph means "What
should be done? Maybe tell the men ..."
Raw Data |
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Number of paragraphs = 4 # of Prepositional Phrases = 13
# of Sub Clauses Level
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# of Sub Clauses Level 2 = 0
# of Sub Clauses Level 3 = 0
# of Sub Clauses Level 4= 0
# of Fragments = 0
# of S/V Agr Errors = 0 |
Words
per main clause = 10.9
Prep Phrases / Main Clause
= .68
Total Sub Clauses / Main Cl = .32 Sub Clauses Level 2+ / MC = 0
Words per paragraph = 52.0 |
Unanalyzed Text:
In my essay I'm going to give name to the
these people, the two women's names will be Chris and Kathy, and the supervisor
will be Bob. In this story Chris and Kathy were short skirts to work and
Bob just could not keep his eyes off them. So Bob said that there skirts
were distracting to them. Chris and Kathy got upset because they saw nothing
wrong with there skirts and desided to sue.
Now in there jobs as the city planners
I see no problem with women dressing nicely but maybe there skirts were
just too short, and the supervisor just like what he sow and counld not
stop looking. It is not the Chris's and Kathy's falt that Bob can not control
him self. But this is not sexual harassment, but maybe a comument for the
girls.
And if the girl don't like the comument
they should not dress this way. But they should be allow to dress nice
and not get harassment froma man who can not controle himself.
What should be done may tell the men to
look and keep his mouth close and maybe tell the women not to were short
short skirts. Don't know you in a no win sixuation.