Student's Name:_____________________________________
ENL 121 (Vavra) Grading Sheet for MP1 (1 of 2)
Possible Points Student's Grading Instructor's Grading Description Totals
Audience (20)  
0 - 4     The essay has a good introductory paragraph.
0 - 4     Introduction includes the author and title of the work written about
0 - 4     The essay has a good concluding paragraph.
0 - 4
    The essay does not simply retell the story.
0 - 4     The essay goes beyond the obvious.
Thesis (20) Fill in the blanks with the concept you are grading.  
0 - 4     The thesis is clearly identifiable,  near the beginning of the essay.
0 - 4     The thesis is a supportable statement of a theme.
0 - 3     The thesis presents more than an obvious statement of a theme.
0 - 3     One concept (_________________) supports the thesis.
0 - 3     A second concept (_________________) supports the thesis.
0 - 3     A third concept (_________________) supports the thesis.
 Organization (20) [Fewer than four paragraphs equals an automatic zero for organization.]  
0 - 3     The formal outline is well organized to support the thesis.
0 - 3     Topic sentences embody the outline.
0 - 3     Topic sentences relate paragraphs to the thesis.
0 - 3
    Topic sentences cover paragraphs.
0 - 3     Paragraphs are not too long or too short.
0 - 3     Focal Sentence - Sub-divisions of a major section of the outline (Roman number) are spread over more than one paragraph.
0 - 1               First Topic Sentence of Sub-division
0 - 1               A Second Topic Sentence of Sub-division
Details (20) Fill in the blanks with the concept you are grading.  
4     The essay includes some details.
0 - 2     The essay includes at least two short quotations (words or phrases) from the story.
0 - 2     The quotations (above) are important support for the essay.
0 - 4     One concept (______________) is explained in good detail.
0 - 4     A second concept (______________) is explained in good detail.
0 - 4     A third concept (______________) is explained in good detail.
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