Finding Clauses
Practice Exercise # 12
Directions: [Work through the text one sentence at a time.]
1. First place parentheses ( ) around every prepositional phrase.
2. Underline every subject once, every finite verb twice, and label
complements (PA, PN, IO or DO). [Reminder: A predicate adjective describes
the subject; a predicate noun "equals" the subject; an indirect object
is someone or thing "to" or "for" whom (or what) the action of the verb
is performed. Any other complement has to be a direct object.]
The text is: |
I had been teaching my
three-year old daughter, Caitlin, the Lord's Prayer. For several evenings
at bedtime, she would repeat after me the lines of the prayer. Finally,
she decided to go solo. I listened with pride as she carefully enunciated
each word, right up to the end of the prayer: "Lead us not into temptation,"
she prayed, "but deliver us some E-mail. Amen." |
Note: In creating these pages, I cannot create a double underline.
I will therefore underline both subjects and finite verbs once, but subjects
will be in green; finite verbs in blue. |
Work your way through the text one sentence
at a time. |
Sentence # 1
Sentence # 2
Sentence # 3
Sentence # 4
The fourth sentence is: |
Ilistened(with
pride) as she
carefully enunciated each word
(DO), right
(up to the end) (of the prayer):
"Leadus(DO)
not (into temptation),"
sheprayed,
"but deliverus(IO)
some E-mail(DO).
Amen." |
You didn't expect them all to be as easy as the first three, did you?
There are numerous ways of analyzing the clauses in this sentence, so I'll
try to lead you through what should be the easiest for you. First
of all, a colon can separate two main clauses, and, since we have
S/V/C patterns on both sides of the colon, we'll split the sentence into
two main clauses. |
Ilistened(with
pride) as she
carefully enunciated each word
(DO), right
(up to the end) (of the prayer):/
"Leadus(DO)
not (into temptation),"
sheprayed,
"but deliverus(IO)
some E-mail(DO).
Amen." |
Before the colon, we have two S/V/C patterns, one of
which starts with the subordinate conjunction "as." The "as" clause
ends with "prayer."
["Of the prayer" chunks to "end." "Up to the end" can be analyzed
at least two ways -- as an adverb to "each," which chunks to "word," or
as an adverb to "enunciated."]
We thus have a clause which begins with "as" and ends with "prayer."
The subordinate conjunction "as" tells us not only that it is
subordinate, but also that the "she enunciated" is being connected
to "I listened" in terms of time (Hume's
"extension"). |
Ilistened(with
pride) [Adverbial
to "listened" as she
carefully enunciated each word
(DO), right
(up to the end) (of the prayer)]:/
"Leadus(DO)
not (into temptation),"
sheprayed,
"but deliverus(IO)
some E-mail(DO).
Amen." |
We now have only one unanalyzed pattern before the colon. Since a clause
is an S/V/C pattern and everything that chunks to it, the "I listened"
is the core of this main clause, and the clause ends with "prayer."
But we still need to deal with the three S/V/C patterns that come after
the colon. One way of looking at these clauses is to consider
the "Lead" and "deliver" clauses as direct objects of "prayed": |
/sheprayed,
[DO of "prayed"
"Leadus(DO)
not (into temptation)],
but [DO of "prayed"
deliverus(IO)
some E-mail(DO).
Amen.]" / |
In this view, the ", but" joins the two equal subordinate clauses.
[The "Amen" can be considered part of the subordinate clause, or, because
of the period that precedes it, it can be viewed as a separate main fragment.]
The KISS psycholinguistic
model suggests another way of analyzing these three clauses: |
/
"Leadus(DO)
not (into temptation),"
sheprayed,
"but deliverus(IO)
some E-mail(DO).
Amen." |
The model suggests that, after the colon, (unless it finds a subordinate
conjunction) a reader's brain will be looking for a main S/V/C pattern.
Thus, it will interpret "Lead" as a finite verb in a main clause pattern.
It will then interpret "she prayed" as an interjection,
followed by the "deliver" clause as another main clause. |
/
"Leadus(DO)
not (into temptation),"
[Interjectionsheprayed,] / "but
deliverus(IO)
some E-mail(DO).
Amen." / |
In this course, I expect you to have problems with a sentence like
this one. Such sentences will become clearer after you analyze more sentences
that are less complex. (Practice makes perfect, and in this course you
do not have time for a lot of practice.) |
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