Finding Clauses
Practice Exercise # 8
Directions: [Work through the text one sentence at a time.]
1. First place parentheses ( ) around every prepositional phrase.
2. Underline every subject once, every finite verb twice, and label
complements (PA, PN, IO or DO). [Reminder: A predicate adjective describes
the subject; a predicate noun "equals" the subject; an indirect object
is someone or thing "to" or "for" whom (or what) the action of the verb
is performed. Any other complement has to be a direct object.]
The text is: |
The preacher was wired
for sound with a lapel mike, and as he preached, he moved briskly about
the platform, jerking the mike cord as he went. Then he moved to one side,
getting wound up in the cord and nearly tripping before jerking it again.
After several circles and jerks, a little girl in the third pew leaned
toward her mother and whispered, "If he gets loose, will he hurt us?" |
Note: In creating these pages, I cannot create
a double underline. I will therefore underline both subjects and finite
verbs once, but subjects will be in green; finite verbs in blue. |
Sentence #1
Work
your way through the text one sentence at a time. The first sentence is: |
The preacherwas
wired(for
sound) (with a lapel mike), and as hepreached,
hemoved
briskly (about the platform),
jerking the mike cord as hewent. |
Because there is more
than one S/V/C pattern, we need to keep two things in mind:
1. begin with the last pattern and
work backwards
2. look for subordinate conjunctions.
The last pattern in this sentence is simple -- "he
went." It is also preceded by the subordinate conjunction "as," which means
that it is probably a subordinate clause. To be sure of this, we need
to see what it "chunks" to. The "as" here indicates that the "he went"
is occurring at the same time as something else in the sentence. That "something
else" is "jerking the mike." Thus the clause is adverbial to "jerking."
[On paper, you can simply draw an arrow from the "as" to "jerking."] |
The preacherwas
wired(for
sound) (with a lapel mike), and as hepreached,
hemoved
briskly (about the platform),
jerking the mike cord [Adv.
to "jerking" as hewent]. |
Having finished with the "as" clause, work
on the next pattern (going backwards). This one will cause a few problems.
The core of this clause
(the words in the S/V/C pattern) is "he moved." We need to find the
first and last words in this clause. Remember: a clause is an S/V/C
pattern and all the words that chunk to it.
What is the last word
in
the "he moved" clause? "Briskly" tells how he moved, and thus chunks to
"moved." "About the platform" tells where he moved, and thus also chunks
to "moved." That brings us to "jerking the mike cord," which obviously
all chunks together as a unit, but what does that troublesome word "jerking"
chunk to? When we asked "Who or what is jerking," the answer was "he."
This means that "jerking" functions as an adjective to "he," and that "jerking
the mike cord" is part of the "he moved" clause. But we also noted that
"as he went" chunks to "jerking." This means that it too is part of the
"he moved" clause. The "he moved" clause thus ends with the word "went."
Now we need to find
the first word in the "he moved" clause. In front of "he," we find
"preached," which is a finite verb in a different pattern. The subject
of "preached" is "he," and in front of "he" we find the subordinate conjunction
"as." This "as" indicates that "as he preached" is itself a subordinate
clause. The "as" here means that the preaching took place at the same time
that something else was happening, and the sentence means that the preaching
was going on while he was moving. Thus the "as he preached clause is adverbial
and chunks to "moved." |
The preacherwas
wired(for
sound) (with a lapel mike), and [Adv.
to "moved" as hepreached],
hemoved
briskly (about the platform),
jerking the mike cord [Adv.
to "jerking" as hewent]. |
The "he moved" clause thus begins with "as he
preached" and ends with "went." In front of the "as," we find an
"and," and, on the other side of the "and," we find another clause. The
"and" thus joins the first clause {"The preacher . . . mike"} and the "he
moved" clause {as he preached . . . went}. Remember that "and," "or," and
"but" join equals (subject and subject, verb and verb, clause and clause,
etc.).
Because one of these clauses must be a main clause,
and because the "and" joins equals, they must both be main clauses.
Thus we can put a vertical line after "mike" and another at the end of
the sentence: |
The preacherwas
wired(for
sound) (with a lapel mike), /
and [Adv. to "moved"
as
hepreached],
hemoved
briskly (about the platform),
jerking the mike cord [Adv.
to "jerking" as hewent].
/ |
We have analyzed all
the S/V/C patterns, and thus are finished with this sentence. |
Sentence #2
Sentence #3
The last sentence is: |
(After several circles and jerks),
a little girl (in
the third pew) leaned(toward
her mother) and
whispered,
"If hegetsloose
(PA), willhehurtus
(DO)?" |
Again, because there is more than one S/V/C
pattern, we need to keep two things in mind:
1. begin with the last pattern and
work backwards
2. look for subordinate conjunctions.
The last pattern ("will he hurt us") obviously ends
with "us," but where does it begin? In front of "will," we find
"loose" which is the predicate adjective in another pattern, but if we
look at that pattern, we find that it begins with the subordinate conjunction
"if." Thus "If he gets loose" is a subordinate clause which gives the conditions
under which he "will hurt" us. The "if" clause is therefore adverbial to
"will hurt," and thus part of the "he will hurt us" clause: |
(After several circles and jerks),
a little girl (in
the third pew) leaned(toward
her mother) and
whispered,
"[Adv. to "will hurt"
If
hegetsloose
(PA)],
willhehurtus
(DO)?" |
We now know that the
"will he hurt us" clause begins with "if" and ends with "us," but we need
to determine if it is a main or a subordinate clause. The word before
the clause is "whispered." In looking for S/V/C patterns we had a problem
finding the complement of "whispered." In terms of meaning, we knew that
the answer to the question "Whispered whom or what?" was the entire "If
he gets loose, will he hurt us?" But, not having studied clauses, we didn't
know what that was. Now we know that it is a clause. Finally, because the
clause neither modifies nor equals "girl" (the subject of "whispered"),
the clause has to function as a subordinate clause, the direct object of
"whispered." |
(After several circles and jerks),
a little girl (in
the third pew) leaned(toward
her mother) and
whispered,
"[DO of "whispered"
[Adv.
to "will hurt" If
hegetsloose],
willhehurtus?"] |
Moving backwards from
the end of the sentence, we now have only one S/V/C pattern left
-- "girl leaned and whispered . . ." Once we are down to one such pattern,
all we need to do is to put a vertical line at the end of the sentence. |
(After several circles and jerks),
a little girl (in
the third pew) leaned(toward
her mother) and
whispered,
"[DO of "whispered"
[Adv.
to "will hurt" If
hegetsloose],
willhehurtus?"]/ |
If you want to take
the time, you can analyze the rest of the sentence to see that everything
chunks to the S/V/C pattern in the main clause:
"After several
circles and jerks" tells when she "leaned" and "whispered," and thus functions
as an adverb to the two finite verbs in the main pattern.
"[A]" and "little" chunk
to the subject "girl," as does the following phrase, "in the third pew."
The phrase "toward her
mother" tells where she "leaned," and thus is adverbial to it.
And, of course, the
clause "If ... us" functions as the direct object of "whispered" and is
therefore part of the main S/V/C pattern. As often happens, the main clause
is the entire sentence.
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