KISS Level 3.1.2. Adding Subordinate
Clauses
The ability to untangle
subordinate clauses may be the most important thing that most students
need from a formal study of grammar. Once they can do so, and once they
understand the idea of chunking, they can understand almost all the “errors”
that are typically worried about -- comma-splices, run-ons, and fragments
are all clause boundary errors. But beyond errors, the ability to identify
and discuss clauses will enable students to explore major areas of logic
and style. These are, I would suggest, more important than the primary
KISS objective -- the ability to explain every word in every text.
Yes, students will know
and do more, if they can identify the types of verbals (gerunds, gerundives,
and infinitives), appositives, and noun absolutes, but an understanding
of those constructions will not help students much if they cannot untangle
the clauses in any sentence. This section explains the most frequently
used types of clauses -- those that function as simple nouns, adjectives,
and adverbs. More complicated (and less frequent) clauses are introduced
in KISS Level 3.2.
The exercises at this
level (3.1.2) consist almost entirely of "Level-One" clauses -- generally
one subordinate clause within a main clause. Clauses are, however, frequently
embedded within clauses, as in:
They knew [that
the man [who
stole Sunday]
was a magician].
Many students are amazed to learn that there can
be clauses within clauses. KISS Level 3.1.3 focuses on untangling embedded
clauses.
Two Approaches to Teaching Clauses -- Learning
Curves
The question here is
how and how quickly does one introduce students to the kinds and embedding
of clauses. The question implies a continuum, not an “either/or” distinction.
In essence, it is a question of learning curves -- gradual or steep. I
myself prefer the steep curve because it requires students to learn and
apply an analytical procedure that they will need anyway (to untangle sentences
that include multiple subordinate clauses). Ultimately, it is also faster.
The other primary advantage of the steep curve approach is that it forces
students to think, right from the beginning. The exercises in this level
are organized to address both learning curves.
The Steep Curve Approach
In the steepest of the
steep-curve approaches, students are introduced to clauses, main and subordinate
and embedding, all at the same time. They are given the instructional material
and told to follow the analytical procedure:
Identify prepositional phrases, and
then S/V/C patterns. For every S/V/C pattern, there is a clause. Check
for conjunctions and compounding. Check for subordinating conjunctions,
and then, if all the clauses are not explained, begin with the last S/V/C
pattern and work your way backward. Find the first and last words in the
clause, and determine how the clause functions—noun, adjective, or adverb.
This approach works, but teachers have to expect
initial confusion (and errors) from the students until they get the hang
of it. Most students' difficulty here is not really with KISS and grammar.
It is much more fundamental -- they have not been taught how to solve multi-step
problems.
In KISS Level 1.2, it
was explained that in Endangered Minds: Why Children Don't Think--and
What We Can Do About It, Jane Healy discusses the following question
(p. 189):

As the figure notes, "Only 6.4% of the 17-year-olds
could solve multi-step problems like this one."
Perhaps the most fundamental
weakness in most education is the focus on “knowing what” rather than on
“knowing how” to solve multi-step problems. Math teachers, for example,
regularly struggle, trying to get the students to follow the procedures
(steps) for solving problems. At the college level, the problems are more
wide-spread. Particularly in the technical areas, professors complain that
students seem to think that either one knows the answer or one does not.
Many students refuse to learn the steps (the “how”) to solve problems.
But in the technological world in which we live, all the important problems
require multi-step processes for their solution.
Most grammar books,
of course, teach “what,” not “how.” But if you have been working with the
KISS Approach, you have already seen one procedure — the steps for determining
complements. The procedure for distinguishing the types of clauses simply
builds upon that one, but I cannot overly emphasize its importance. The
KISS Approach, in other words, not only helps students to learn how to
identify clauses fairly easily and quickly -- it also helps students understand
the importance of multi-step thinking.
To use the steep leaning
curve, have your students use the analytical procedure and do the
exercises in the first section, "Mixed Subordinate Clauses." If they can
do them, you can skip the exercises that focus just on noun clauses as
direct objects, on adverbial clauses, and those on adjectival clauses.
(You may, however, want to have them do some of the combining and logic
exercises in those sections.)
The Gradual Curve
If the steep curve seems
to be too steep, start with the sections on the various types of clauses.
In them, students are first introduced to noun clauses that function
as direct objects. The reasons for this are simple: 1.) subordinate clauses
that function as direct objects are very common, and 2.) these students
have already been taught to look for and identify the complements of verbs.
In a sentence such as “We asked if we could go to the park,” students are
going to look for the complement of “asked” by asking “Asked what? They
can meaningfully see that the answer to that question is “if we could go
to the park.” Having studied compound man clauses, and thus having a sense
of what a “clause” is, they can understand that “if we could go to the
park” is a clause and that it functions as the direct object of “asked.”
This approach, therefore, should clarify rather than confuse them.
The next section focuses on
adverbial clauses (because the conjunctions are relatively easy to identify),
and the next is on adjectival clauses. KISS instructional materials
include a “special focus” on what are called “mid-branching” adjectival
clauses simply because some students are confused by them. “Mid-branching”
means that the subordinate clause appears between the subject and verb
of the main clause. (“Left-branching” appear before the main clause, and
“right branching” appear after.) “Branching” raises some interesting stylistic
questions, but the point here is that in a sentence such as “The man who
stole Sunday was a magician,” many students will look at “stole” and see
“man” as its subject. They are not accustomed to seeing an S/V/C pattern
between a subject and its verb. Thus KISS has a few exercises to help them
-- if they need them. Students are then introduced to the less frequently
used other noun clauses -- objects of prepositions, subjects, and predicate
nouns.
If you are using this approach,
you can then go back to the "Mixed" section as a general "bringing it all
together."
Suggested Directions for Analytical Exercises
1. Place parentheses ( ) around each prepositional phrase.
2. Underline verbs twice, their subjects once, and label complements
(“PA,” “PN,” “IO,” or “DO”).
3. Place brackets [ ] around each subordinate clause. If the clause
functions as a noun, label its function. If it functions as an adjective
or adverb, draw an arrow from the opening bracket to the word that the
clause modifies.
4. Place a vertical line after each main clause.
Probable Time Required: See the
Introduction.
Mixed,
Ex 1 a - f : Identification |
a
b
Rewriting Main Clauses as Subordinate:
Mixed,
Ex 4: A Passage for Analysis |
Mixed,
Ex 5 a and b: Style - Parallel Subordinate Clauses |
These two exercises are in all of the grade-level books. |
Noun
Clauses as Direct Objects
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For students who can identify subjects, finite
verbs, and complements, noun clauses that function as direct objects should
be more of a clarification that a source of confusion, especially if they
have been analyzing randomly selected texts. They will frequently have
seen sentences such as "Paul thought the game was fun." They know, of course,
that "the game" does not completely answer the question "Whom or what?"
after "thought," but what, grammatically is the real answer - "the game
was fun"? Now they will know that it is a noun clause that functions as
a direct object.
With one possible exception, the only thing
that may confuse students is how to deal with quotations as direct objects
when the quotations themselves contain multiple main clauses. Consider
sentence:
Then the gentle Spirit of Fire called, “Come back, my flames,
come back again! The people in the village will not know that you are in
a frolic, and they will be afraid.”
The quotation that functions, semantically (meaningfully), as the direct
object of "called" consists of four main clauses. In some cases, you may
find entire paragraphs that function as the direct object of a single verb.
This is a question that I have never seen addressed in a grammar textbook.
Obviously, we cannot process entire paragraphs in short-term memory.
The KISS way of handling this is to consider
the end of the first main clause as the end of a main clause. In other
words, syntactically (as opposed to semantically) the first main clause
in the quotation functions as the direct object of "called," and each of
the following main clauses is then marked with a vertical line. (See the
instructional
material.) A related, but probably less frequent question arises when
the "said" pattern appears somewhere in the middle of the quotation (or
indirect speech). See KISS Level 3.2.3
- Interjection? Or Direct Object?
Following two exercises on identifying simple
noun clauses as direct objects, the third exercise addresses quotations
(with multiple main clauses) as direct objects of a single verb. This exercise
is followed by a "Treasure Hunt/Recipe Roster." |
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DO, Ex 1 a and b: Identification |
N
DO, Ex 3: Treasure Hunt (and/or Recipe Roster) |
Treasure Hunt
(and/or Recipe Roster): Find and bring to class (and/or write) a sentence
that has a clause used as a direct object.
Creating an Exercise: In a story or
book that you like, find five sentences that have noun clauses used as
direct objects. For your classmates, make an exercise with them; for your
teacher, make an analysis key. (Remember that your teacher may use your
exercise in future years.) |
Adverbial
Subordinate Clauses
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Adverb,
Ex 1 a - d: Identification |
Adverb,
Ex 2: Sentence-Building
- Adding Adverbial Clauses |
Adverb,
Ex 3 a and b: Rewriting Adverbial Clauses as Main and Main as Adverbial |
Adverb,
Ex 4: The Logic of Adverbial Clauses
(ID - Ten Sentences) |
See the instructional
material under "Mixed Clauses."
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Adverb,
Ex 5: The Logic of Adverbial Clauses
(Combining Five Sentences) |
Adverb,
Ex 6: A Passage for Analysis |
Exercise
7: Treasure Hunt (and/or Recipe Roster) |
Treasure Hunt
(and/or Recipe Roster): Find and bring to class (and/or write) a sentence
that has an adverbial subordinate clause in it.
Creating an Exercise: In a story or
book that you like, find five sentences that have subordinate clauses used
as adverbs. For your classmates, make an exercise with them; for your teacher,
make an analysis key. (Remember that your teacher may use your exercise
in future years.) |
Adjectival
Subordinate Clauses
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Adjectival,
Ex 1 a - c: Identification |
Adjectival,
Ex 2: Mid-Branching Adjectival Clauses |
Adjectival,
Ex 3: Sentence-Building
- Adding Adjectival Clauses |
Adjectival,
Ex 5 a and b:
Rewriting Adjectival Clauses
as Main
and Main as Adjectival |
Adjectival,
Ex 6: A Passage for Analysis |
Exercise
7: Treasure Hunt (and/or Recipe Roster) |
Treasure Hunt
(and/or Recipe Roster): Find and bring to class (and/or write) a sentence
that has an adjectival subordinate clause in it.
Creating an Exercise: In a story or
book that you like, find five sentences that have subordinate clauses used
as adjectives. For your classmates, make an exercise with them; for your
teacher, make an analysis key. (Remember that your teacher may use your
exercise in future years.) |
Noun,
Ex 1 a and b: Identification (Mixed) |
Passages
Noun,
Ex 2: Noun Clauses as Objects of Prepositions |
Noun,
Ex 3: Noun Clauses as Subjects |
Noun,
Ex 4: Noun Clauses as Predicate Nouns |
Noun,
Ex 5: Treasure Hunts (and/or Recipe Rosters) |
Noun Clauses as Objects of a Preposition
Find and bring to class (and/or write) two sentences
that have a subordinate clause used as the object of a preposition.
Noun Clauses as Subjects
In a book that you like, find two sentences
that include noun clauses used as subjects. For your classmates, make an
exercise with them; for your teacher, make an analysis key. These clauses
are not easy to find, so your teacher may have you work in groups to do
this, perhaps by having each student search a different chapter of the
same book. (Remember that your teacher may use your exercise in future
years.)
Predicate Nouns
Find and bring to class (and/or write) two sentences
that have a subordinate clause used as a predicate noun. |
The Dual Functions of Some Subordinate
Conjunctions
This is, perhaps, a minor point,
but at least one "grammarinan" (I believe it was on the ATEG list.) claimed
that subordinating conjunctions do not have a function within their clauses.
That is true of some of the adverbial conjunctions ("because," "since,"
"so"), but it is definitely not true of conjunctions like "who," "whom,"
"whose," "which," and "that."
Consider, for example, the sentences:
1. That is the girl who won the game.
2. She is the woman whom I met yesterday.
3. That is the person whom I was thinking of.
4. That is the book that they were talking about.
5. It is a problem about which much has been written.
We use "who" in the first, and "whom" in the second, precisely
because the conjunctions DO have a function within their clauses. No one
would accept "That is the girl whom won the game" as an acceptable sentence.
In (3), Standard American English
considers "whom" the "proper" form precisely because it functions simultaneously
the subordinating conjunction and the object of the preposition "of." By
analogy, in (4) "that " is simultaneously the subordinating conjunction
and the object of the preposition "about," as is "which" in (5).
Most pedagogical grammars do
not deal with this question because they categorize words rather than analyze
sentences, and apparently some grammarians themselves are stuck on categories
as sorting boxes--a word has to belong in one box, or another. It can't
have more than one function. But that simply is not true.
Recognizing Subordinate Conjunctions
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