My whole family was born {in Knoxville, Tn.} / I have a mom named 

Martha (Retained D.O. after "named") . / I have a father

named Phillip (Retained D.O. after "named"). / I have sister

name Missy (Retained D.O. after "named"). / I have brother

name Sammy (Retained D.O. after "named"). / And me {of

^{Note #2} couse} Sara (Appositive to "me"). / My mother was

really {from South Carolina.} / She is used {to chickens, birds, wild life, 

snakes, kittens, bats.} / She was rasied {by grandmother} Anna 

Bell (Appositive to "grandmother"). / Now let me tell you 

{about my father.} / My father is handsome. / He knows karate. /

He's kinda of a short man. / But my father is a macanic {at General 

Motors.} / He is very handy. / Now here comes my sister. / My 

sister is kinda {like my mother.} / But my sister is very tall. / do you 

know [why she's tall.] / My mother and fathers grandfathers are

tall. / My sister goes {to Chandler.} / She is a flag person. / My 

brother. / My brother is bad. / He knows some karate too. / You

have met him. / He is {in kintergarten.} / His teaches name is Mrs. 

Carter./ Sammy is doing well {in school.} / Finally me. / I am just 

another important person just {like everybody else.} / I try to be myself 

all ^{Note #1} {though the day.} / And try {to my best} each and every 

day (NuA to "try"). / And care {for everybody else.}  / Thank

you. / that's my family. /

     Hello! (Interjection) / Let me tell you [where I live.] / I

live {at 426 Marydale Ave.} / It is the second house [when you go

{down Bow St.}] / It is very big. / It is tanish brown. / It has three 

straight poles {in the front.} / It has four windows {in the front.} /  The

two {in the front} are Sammys Sara's. / The won {on the left} is

Sammy's / and the won {on the right} is Sara's. / Now is time to look

inside. / It is really messy. / [When you go upstairs.] / {On the left} 

you see the kitchen. / And the Living room. / Now {on the right side}

you will see the bathroom. / The linen closet. / And supply closet. /

First is Missy's room. / Then comes Sara's room. / Last is Sammy's

room. / Walk downstairs. / {On the Left} is my Parents room. / They

have the laundry room. / And another bathroom. / Then {on the right} 

is the basement. / We have six tvs and six hbos {on them}.  / 2 vcrs./

a microwave./ We have a Toyota Camery, And a Cheverle. / And 

a woodshed And a swing set. /