/ It happened [when I was playing ball.] / It was{at night} [when 

Fracles got hit.] / Fracles broke lose, and ran down to go {to the 

apple trees.} / And he got hit [when he was crossing the road.] / 

And [whoevery hit Fracles] did not stop. / And then a man saw 

him laying  ^{Note #}  {by the road.} / He saw my ("me") 

playing ball and yelled up {to my}and said [is this your dog.] / 

And I ran {down the driveway} / and I said Yes. / And I told dad. /

And I was crying. /

     I feel good today. / But my arms don't feel too well. / You see I

fell {out of the tree} last night (NuA to "fell"). / My foot sliped  /

and I fell. / It didn't feel very good. / But  I didn't cry. / But [when I 

had the car wrick] I didn't cry ether. /

     I feel good today. / But my eye hurts. / I can't see very well. /

I was {at the brandi's} / and my eye was getting pinked. / And {in 

the morning} [when I woke up] it got stuck. / I had to pull it open. /

     My best friend is Stephany. / I don't [k]now why / but I just

like to play {with her.} / Will (Interjection) see I liked [her - EV]

every {sinse third grade.} / I just think [she is fun to play with.] / 

[Like ^{Note #2} I said before!] /

     The goodest day [I every had] was [when I came {to Xxxxxxxx 

Xxxxxxx}] / I like this school very much. / It is a good school. / I

like my teacher the best ^{Note #3} / she is very nice and pretty and

slim very pretty (Appositive to the first "pretty") and 

SLIM (Appositive to the first "slim")! /