{On the tire} yesterday, I brused my behind. Now it hurts. 

Plus, I almost cracked my head {on the top pole.} The next

thing that happened yesterday was the V.C.R. wouldn't

record a show I wanted to watch. Then the most worst thing

my cat got out and went {in the ceuar.} Then he jumped {in 

another tunnel} {in the ceuar.} Finally when we left he came

out. I thought he would fall {in the deep, deep, hole} Then I

had to take care {of Mack.} Boyy!! Was he heavy Then I had

homework. I was pooped {at the end} {of the day!}

     Yesterday, I was left {in the car} {with my baby 

brother.} When we were {in the car} it was raining, 

thundering, and lightning. As soon as Mark finished his

bottle, he was scared {to death.} I was scared, too. I told 

myself "If dad doesn't come now, I'm going in {with Mark."}

So I did. When I was {out of the car,} here comes my dad! 

Whoo! I thought we were going to get hurt. But we didn't. 

     What is your favorite gem? I had a great time yesterday. 

There's this hill {next to my driveway,} and when you go 

{down it} {on your bike,} it's {like a roller coaster!} {During

the summer} I had to go {to playcamp} One day {at 

playcamp,} we went {to Kings Dominion.} We got there {by

a Blue Bird Bus.} When we got there we split {into four

groups.} My group people ^{Note #2} were Diane, Tereasa, 

Matthew, and me. First we went {on Smurf Mountain Roller 

Coaster!} I sat {with my best friend Tereasa ^{Note #1}} Boy! 

Was that fun! Then we went {on the Diamond Falls Ride!}

We went up, up, up, and we turned and went {down 

the slide,} and Splash! I was soaked!  Then we went {in the

Troll Mines.} I didn't look because I was afraid something 

would pop out {in front of me.} Then we went {on the

swings, Scooby-Doo, Fairis Wheel,} played a game, 

climbed a net and when we got {to the top} Tereasa and I 

went {down the giant tube slide,} we were going to go {on 

White Water Canion} but it was closed. Then we got some

lunch. Then we played one more game, and I won a Giant 

Pink Dog!  I'll bring him one day, just tell me when! 

Yesterday, my mom went to start a fire, and when she 

opened it, there was a big mouse! You see we have a cat 

and each time he comes in,^{Note #3} we think he brings in a

mouse or something and stores it somewhere.