a green and white house} [Adverb to "live"]   I have four 

bedrooms.  My moms bedroom is the biggest, we have seven 

closets {in our house} [Adverb to "have"] so I play hid and 

seek {in them} [Adverb to "play"] my back yard is big so my 

brother built a club house.  We have a shower {in our bath 

room,} [Adverb to "have"] my sister is always {in the shower} 

[Adverb to "is"] when I want to get {in it.} [Adverb to "get"] My 

mom has a dressing room {in her bedroom.} [Adverb to "has"] 

I have lots {of toys} [Adjective to "lots"] {in my room} [Adverb

to "have"] and lots {of Janit Jackson posters and the Jets.}

[Adjective to "lots"] {In my sisters room} [Adverb to "has"] all 

she has is makeup.  I have a bathroom and a dining room and

a living room and a kitchen.  My room is purple and and a 

rainbow {acrose it.} [Adverb to "has"-- here written as the second 

"and", or adjective to "rainbow"]  My brothers room is junky.  This 

morning I woke up and got dressed and then my aunt told me 

to make her a cup {of coffe} [Adjective to "cup"] and I spilled it 

and I fell {in dirt} [Adverb to "fell"] and tangeled my hair  has 

your morning ever started {like this.} [Adverb to "started"]

     This morning I woke and I couldnt find nothing to wear 

and I fell {down the steps} [Adverb to "fell"] but that was not

the worst thing  I couldn't eat my cearl and mile because my 

throght was sore  Oh and also I am going to go {to the new 

mall} [Adverb to "to go"] this week to get new clothes do you go 

{to the new mall.} [Adverb to "go"]   My mother is very 

beatyful. I have a brother and sister.  My dad is tall  my mom 

is short. My brother looks {like my dad.} [Adverb to "looks"] 

^{Note #1} When my mom is {in a good mood} [Adverb to "is"] she 

takes us shopping. Every time my dad is {in a good mood} 

[Adverb to "is"] he gives us money.  My sister looks {like my 

mother} [Adverb to "looks"] and so do I.  My sister is {in Xxxxxx

Xxxxxx Middle School. } [Adverb to "is"]

     My dad is 30.  My mom is 29.  My moms birthday is 

November the 23.  My mom is a nurse  my dad workes {on

cars.} [Adverb to "works"]  my sister is 12, she does my hair. 

my brother is 10.  he fixes bikes. My sisters name is Dxxxxxl 

and my brothers mane is Dxxxxx.  I was born {in Xxxxxxxxx 

Xxxxxxxx.}  [Adverb to "was born"]