trim. If you go {in the front door} you go {down the hall}

and turn left ^{[Note #1]} you come {to my brothers^[Note] room}. 

If you go straight again and turn right is my room. If you go 

{across the hall} is a bathroom. Then go straight is my mom 

and dad ^[Note] room. Now I'll tell you {about my room}, it

is pink^[Note] and has blue carpet. I'll tell you {about my 

brothers^[Note] room}. It is cream color walls, and brown

carpet. He also has a T.V. My mom anddads^[Note] room 

have cream walls and green carpet. Thats^[Note] all the

bedrooms, now lets^[Note] go {in the family room}, another

bedroom, my dogs^[Note] room. There is a tv {in that room}.

A couch, and a chair. The kitchen isnt^[Note]very popular.^[Note]

We eat {in there}. Theres^[Note] a table and four chairs, a oven,

a sink, a refriderator, and cabnets. We have a dining room and

a living room. We put our Christmas tree {in the living

room}. We have a table, two chairs, and a couch. We 

sometimes eat {in the dining room}. The house is {on 300 

Main Street}. The worst day I ever spent {in my life} was 

when I was six years old. I was watching my brother and his

friends play soccer. I had a popcicle {in my hand}. I wanted 

to go inside. So I was going to go {up the steps} {to the

door}, I tripped {in a gap} {in the sidewalk} and hit my

head {on the steps}. I was crying as loud^{[Note #2]} as I could. 

My dad had just got home {from work}, so he was {in his 

good clothes}. He heard me crying and he picked me up. He 

took me {to the bathroom}. When we got {to the

bathroom} both {of our shirts} were soked {with blood}.

My mom was {in the bathroom}. She was cleaning, so she 

had just wetted a washcloth. She put it {on my head}. The

cloth was very cold^[Note]. {In about fifteen minutes}the

bleeding stopped. 

     Today I feel great^[Note].  It's beause we got Nickelodean, 

Disney Channel, and M.T.V. I really like it. Do you like to 

watch T.V? I can't wait {until Halloween}. I might be a

punk or a chinese girl. I might even be a cowgirl. What are 

you going to be {for Halloween}? 

     Today I feel great^[Note]! I am looking forward {to a visit} 

{from my cousin Curt and his wife Michelle}. He is going 

to show us pictures {of when he was {in Hong Kong}! He 

and his wife travel a lot! Today I feel awful^[Note]! Becaus my

dad said he was going to get rid {of the Disney Chanel and

all that junk} because my brother and I fuss {over it}. 

But my dad might let us keep it if were^[Note]good^[Note].